Weekly sketch: Butty Bicuriosa (3/3)

Hi! Fellow deviant artist!
One of the things that we all crave on this site is quality comments. The kind that explores different aspects of our work and gives us hints about what could be done in our next steps to better approach the concept of perfection.
As member of the awesome group <img class="avatar group" width="100" height="50" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/p…" alt="" title="ProjectComment" /> , each day I choose one or two deviant artists to study their work.
I look at the opus of the little padawan with a pencil poignant with candid spontaneity, as I do to the god level artists that make me drool with envy.
So If I’m there analyzing your opus, that’s means that I have already a positive impression of your work. Cheers! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Now… let begin with the fun.
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First of all you are really good with your pencil, you do beautifully some “bootyfull” art.
Your value are right, your outline show that you have a sure hand.
Anatomically all seems right
And I really like the way you did the shading, it’s quick and efficient.
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I tried to see what I would change but this is a sketch masterly done. The only devil I could pursue would be in the details, but detail is not the point of this opus. It’s more about raw potentiality.
Voilà
Again it was a pleasure to look at your work and I hope I was of some help <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="47" height="16" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="58" title="Headbang!"/>